Week 6 Story: The Rishi and the Mermaid
Somewhere there was a river where a mermaid named Satyavati resided. She was born to a fish who caught the seed of a passing gandharva as it was looking up. Because she inherited her mother's tail instead of her father's legs, Satyavati was trapped in the river and had to find ways to lessen her boredom. Initially, she took to watching and listening to the people on the banks and crossing the river while hidden from a distance.
One day the mermaid noticed some people who were struggling to cross. She wanted to help, but she was still afraid of people. It took her a bit, but she managed to overcome her anxiety and swam over to help them. From that day on, Satyavati took to ferrying people across the river. This did wonders to alleviate the mermaid's boredom, and she learned ever so much about the world beyond water.
Then there came the fateful day when the rishi named Parashara appeared. He asked to be ferried across the river, and like she did to all of the others, she obliged. As they journeyed, they exchanged stories and witty banter. Despite the short time together, Parashara became smitten with the mermaid. He asked for her comfort and companionship, for he believed this could be the only time he may witness a creature of such splendor. Satyavati was taken aback by this. No one had made a proposition like this before to her, and she did not know how to handle it.
With nervousness in her voice, she responded, "I am flattered by your offer, but as you can see, I am half fish. I am bound to the water and all things in it. Such a union between us would not work."
The rishi smiled. "I can grant you freedom from you aquatic prison. I can give you the power to walk upon the dry land just as I and all those others you have helped. I can grant this wish if you afterwards grant mine."
Satyavati pondered this. Here this man dangled a sweet fruit before her, yet it held such a degrading price. "If you are worried about being seen," added Parashara, "I will shroud the area with impenetrable fog." She pondered some more. Finally, she agreed. Fog gathered around them. The mermaid's tail turned to a pair of legs, and then she paid the rishi's price. They arrived at the other side of the river. Feeling dirty from the price she paid, Satyavati set her first step onto dry land and began her new life beyond the water.
Author's Note. This story was based on the part of the Mahabharata where Satyavathi was telling Bhishma about her origins. She was born from a fish that caught the seed of a gandharva flying by, and smelled fishy because of this. At one point in time, she ferried Parashara across the river, and he fell in love with her. He dispelled the fish smell and gave her a lovely fragrance in its stead. Then a fog rose to hide their union, and later she gave birth to Vyasa hidden on an island.
The original story with how Satyavati came to be was a bit weird to me. I thought it would be interesting to make Satyavati a mermaid in this story considering her mother was a fish and her father probably looked human. In a way, that makes more sense than a human who smells like fish that was born from a fish.
Bibliography. Mahabharata by R. K. Narayan, link to Reading Guide A.
One day the mermaid noticed some people who were struggling to cross. She wanted to help, but she was still afraid of people. It took her a bit, but she managed to overcome her anxiety and swam over to help them. From that day on, Satyavati took to ferrying people across the river. This did wonders to alleviate the mermaid's boredom, and she learned ever so much about the world beyond water.
Then there came the fateful day when the rishi named Parashara appeared. He asked to be ferried across the river, and like she did to all of the others, she obliged. As they journeyed, they exchanged stories and witty banter. Despite the short time together, Parashara became smitten with the mermaid. He asked for her comfort and companionship, for he believed this could be the only time he may witness a creature of such splendor. Satyavati was taken aback by this. No one had made a proposition like this before to her, and she did not know how to handle it.
With nervousness in her voice, she responded, "I am flattered by your offer, but as you can see, I am half fish. I am bound to the water and all things in it. Such a union between us would not work."
The rishi smiled. "I can grant you freedom from you aquatic prison. I can give you the power to walk upon the dry land just as I and all those others you have helped. I can grant this wish if you afterwards grant mine."
Satyavati pondered this. Here this man dangled a sweet fruit before her, yet it held such a degrading price. "If you are worried about being seen," added Parashara, "I will shroud the area with impenetrable fog." She pondered some more. Finally, she agreed. Fog gathered around them. The mermaid's tail turned to a pair of legs, and then she paid the rishi's price. They arrived at the other side of the river. Feeling dirty from the price she paid, Satyavati set her first step onto dry land and began her new life beyond the water.
The Mermaid by Howard Pyle
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Author's Note. This story was based on the part of the Mahabharata where Satyavathi was telling Bhishma about her origins. She was born from a fish that caught the seed of a gandharva flying by, and smelled fishy because of this. At one point in time, she ferried Parashara across the river, and he fell in love with her. He dispelled the fish smell and gave her a lovely fragrance in its stead. Then a fog rose to hide their union, and later she gave birth to Vyasa hidden on an island.
The original story with how Satyavati came to be was a bit weird to me. I thought it would be interesting to make Satyavati a mermaid in this story considering her mother was a fish and her father probably looked human. In a way, that makes more sense than a human who smells like fish that was born from a fish.
Bibliography. Mahabharata by R. K. Narayan, link to Reading Guide A.
Hi, Molly! I think your take on the story is really interesting. I, like you, thought the original story was a little strange, so I really enjoyed your rendition in which Satyavati was a mermaid. I think its a nice, syncretic blend of the Mahabharatha-style fairy tales and what we know as Western-style fairy tales. Great job on your story; I really look forward to reading more of your work in the future!
ReplyDeleteHi Molly,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you told this story, how you added a modern twist to it. Changing Satyavati into a mermaid was a great idea. It made more of sense for the sage to give her legs instead of just letting go her fishy smell. I liked your version better as it was more interesting. Good job on the story! I hope to read more of it in future!
I actually chose to rewrite this part of the Mahabharata as well! It's interesting that you chose to twist the story with a mermaid. I love mermaids (who doesn't?), so I was really excited while reading your story. For some reason, I kept thinking of the movie Aquamarine when you were describing Satyavati, because that's one of my all-time favorite movies.
ReplyDeleteAnyways, it's interesting and quite amazing at how many different ways stories can be re-made.
Great job!
Hey Molly. I like how you made the very bizarre story of this character's birth and later young life and put a new, more familiar skin on it. It helps that as American's we have been raised to not believe in mermaids, but also not find them strange characters in stories. I really like the image you chose as well.
ReplyDeleteHey Molly!
ReplyDeleteI loved your story. I thought the backstory of Satyavati was interesting the first time I read it, but I love what you have added here. Making her a mermaid was so much better than a girl who just smelled like a fish. It gave a more 'mystical' side to her character. I also liked what you did with her and Parashara's story! It was nice to get more of the backstory between them. Great job!
Molly, I thought I would look to read another story from you, since I already read Week 10's story. I am glad I chose this one of all of them. I was intrigued by your title, as many may have been. Once I started reading, I could not stop. I really love how you transformed Satyavati into a mermaid instead of being a fish, because that did not sit well with me either. I, too, wrote about this story. What is awesome, is that we both chose different aspects to focus on and that was Satyavati's story with Parashara, very similar to the Little Mermaid but also very different. Whereas, my story focused more on the actual scent and the story between Satyavati and King Shantanu. Great job on your version!
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